Draft

Under the Oak Tree (An Inkling of Novel)
Before we get to the critiquing... At this point, this 'prologue' is part of a romantic fiction short story I am hoping to enter into the Vocal Writing Awards. (VWAs). But what I noticed as I planned it, I had the makings of a novel idea.
By Alexandria Stanwyck3 years ago in Critique
Keep Criticism Constructive
Introduction Vocal has four new Communities, and although they are not for me, I feel I need to have at least one post in each Vocal Community and I can always find a reason to write about almost any subject.
By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 3 years ago in Critique
Grasshoppers (Work in Progress)
Note: I started this a long time ago and left it in a desk drawer with a plan that remained unfinished. These are only the first seven chapters (I wrote about thirty-three pages), and I would like some feedback on this work. It is based on an actual trip I took with some friends while in Japan, but with a lot of my imagination thrown in. I just wonder if I can take this somewhere...
By Kendall Defoe 3 years ago in Critique
For Critique: Parasocial
I took a vacation to Korea in May 2023 and it was amazing! I went as part of a TrovaTrip package with a content creator I admire and had one of the greatest travel experiences of my whole life.
By Alexander McEvoy3 years ago in Critique
For Critique: Crossroads
I first started writing Crossroads a month or two ago, and though I love the idea, I haven't been able to find the prose for it yet.
By Alexander McEvoy3 years ago in Critique