Parents prepare pumpkin patches...
🎃
Pretty
Passionate
Parents,
Preparing
Pumpkins
Previously
Patched...
Pregnant
Patients,
Preparing
Pumpkins
Providing
Purpose...
Patch
Patch
Patch...
Painful
Positions
Processing
Pinnacles...
Parents
Please
Proceed...
Patch
Patch
Patch...
Parents
Prepare
Pumpkin
Patch... 🎃
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Pitter-patter, pitter-patter. The rain fell in rhythmic splatters, slowly slowing, but still constant. Mira rolled onto her side pulling the blanket tight against her ears, but still she could hear chitter-chatter and scurrying feet of the creatures that refused to sleep in the lower decks.
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Loved it :)
Pretty perfectly amazing work. Such fun!
This was great! I tell you had fun with this one!
Positively perfect!!!💖💖💕
You ‘patched’ this one together so well, Lonzo! 💕🙂
Nice 👍🫶🏽
Nicely done!
This was fantastic!
Patches? We don't need no stinking patches! At this point you probably think I'm some kind of Bogart nut!
Perfect for fall! 🎃 🧡