Metamorphosis
Submission for "The Unnecessary Line" Challenge

The desert at night lives.
A metamorphosis of the sand causes the previously stifling landscape to shift,
Becoming cold, swirling drifts of heavy, tan snow,
And the calm is tangible.
The fires are still burning,
the people are still singing, and
the air is still lit with the calming scent of heavy, perfumed smoke,
And it feels possible to live here in peace.
A hookah is still smoking from inside a tent, and
the previously stationary, sparse trees of the day become
alive, thrumming columns -
their crisp fronds shaken by the gentle night breeze.
The scene erupts with the crescendo of a sure, clear voice, singing above the rest -
sending the most powerful, hopeful notes into the sky, hurried on by the heat of the flames -
prayers and wishes that are put to music transcend past the simple words we use.
In this moment, it's almost as though the sacred sand beneath our feet is worth more than the blood and oil and acres spent claiming it -
almost as though the scars forced on this parcel of earth have not marred it beyond repair.
Almost.
This place shall fade into ruins, once the blasts have razed its sacred stones to the ground.
About the Creator
Maura Bernstein
I am a high school English teacher living in Maryland with my wife & two fur babies. I like to write poetry & horror stories & like most writers, I'm working on ideas for books that are unfinished & waiting for my very divided attention.



Comments (4)
Lovely story๐ปโฅ๏ธ๐
๐๐๐ฒ , ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ก๐๐๐ค๐๐ ๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ . ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐จ๐จ๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐จ๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง. ๐โ๐ฆ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐จ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ด๐ฎ, ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ต๐๐ฎ, ๐๐ผ๐บ๐ถ๐ฐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ช๐ฒ๐ฏ๐๐ผ๐ผ๐ป๐. ๐ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎโ๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ง, ๐ก๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ( ๐๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ง๐๐ฆ๐:bennett_lol) ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ฌ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ค. ๐๐๐งโ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ. ๐๐ก๐๐๐ซ๐ฌ, Bennett.
Congratulations on your Top Story! I was born in Baltimore and lived in Annapolis btw. Saw in your bio..that you are in Maryland. In Sweden now. Incredible piece!
Read this yesterday and thought it was brilliant. Glad to be back to see it get Top Story. Congrats